Someday you'll see,
the love behind those eyes.
That they weren't lying
you will realise.
someday you'll value
the words she said.
For they weren't mere letters,
they bore her heart beats instead.
Someday you'll feel
her gentle kiss.
when your lips are parched,
in search of the perfect bliss.
Someday as you walk,
you'll long for her footsteps.
You'll miss those imprints in sand,
In your loneliness.
Someday her single tear
To you,would mean a lot.
When She'd be away, defeated
in the battle she fought.
Someday you'd wish,
you hadn't walked away.
That she'd still be with you
by your side, this day.
the love behind those eyes.
That they weren't lying
you will realise.
someday you'll value
the words she said.
For they weren't mere letters,
they bore her heart beats instead.
Someday you'll feel
her gentle kiss.
when your lips are parched,
in search of the perfect bliss.
Someday as you walk,
you'll long for her footsteps.
You'll miss those imprints in sand,
In your loneliness.
Someday her single tear
To you,would mean a lot.
When She'd be away, defeated
in the battle she fought.
Someday you'd wish,
you hadn't walked away.
That she'd still be with you
by your side, this day.
24 rhymes:
bful poem pj! you are quite a poet!
omg !!
I dun wanna be the 'you' of your poem :P
Nice blog,,,,
By the way i have also updated my blog..have a look..a comment how u like it....
bloody brilliant!!
Awesome my dear.Really nice....
@the loverthanks lover!!
@peter
oh don wrry....u wont be,hope u never have to b the'you':)
@s.a.m.b.i.t
thank you!
will surely chk out ur blog...
@trinaa,@chaggoholic
Thank you!!:D:D
cheers!
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Someday he will feel the breath of hers on his skin,
The impelling hairs of hers kissing his chin,
Trembling hands engulfing in resonance,
She will have the laugh, he will resonate it!
Chanced across your profile from the link(Orkut one) couldn't help commenting. Gracias!
b'fully put...
loved it,absolutly...
@peter
done:)
@prabhu dutta das
hey nice words there!!:)
thnx fr stoppin by:)
@pooja
thank u so much:)
cheers!
the lost love and the regrets later...
nicely worded...beautifully expressed
:)
@mystique wanderer
Thanks:)
well written...no complications...and thats the only type I like...
Scribblers Inc.
@scribblers inc
thnx...
i like it that way too,the simpler the better
i liked this poem. it's simple, yet conveys the right feelings. and i found myself relating to it. thanks for this poem...
keep writing!
wow.. this is beautiful..
not just the post.. the entire blog.
very apt.
@warmsunshine
hey! glad u cud relate to the poem
@'j'
Thank you soo much:D
I wait for that day :-)
Someday as you walk,
you'll long for her footsteps.
You'll miss those imprints in sand,
In your loneliness.
Beautiful lines.
Hii. First time to ur blog....Will definately come back for more.
someday you'll value
the words she said.
For they weren't mere letters,
they bore her heart beats instead
oh man....this one was a masterpiece...you literally had me yearning...too good pj....the way you build up the whole post is something which can be put across as a perfect example to people who wanna write poetry...you keep on raising the bar higher and higher and leave the reader gasping for more when you decide to cut short the bliss...you couldnt have ended it better...someday you'd wish, you hadnt walked away...wow! hats off!!
@sach!
:):)good luck!:D
@diana
thanks!...hope to see u often:)
@sandeep balan
omg! THANK YOU so much!!!:D:D
i am so flattered!!!
thanks again!!!:D:D:D
first time i have read your blog..rocking post!!!!!
can relate to some of the lines of your poem...
keep posting :)
nice thoughts ..
someday you will know ..
why we weren't meant to be..
@nefariousoutlook, @Achilles's Heel
thanks!:D:D
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