There's more to me
than what you see.
behind a quiet face
lies a sea of insanity.
I am
like those feelings,
that find no expression.
like those few words,
that have no definition.
like...
The depth of the ocean
you never discovered.
Like those mountain tops,
Which were never conquered.
Like...
those fine and tiny
grains of sand,
which when held, find a way
and escape through your hand.
What you think of me
might be just your imagination.
For that might be a mirage
perhaps just an illusion
Dont go by my looks
For looks can deceive.
The truth is not always
what your eyes perceive
Yet I am, like the rest
just a face in the crowd.
A tiny dot on the earth,
A perfection that is flawed.
Do not try to find me,
Do not understand me.
Let me be a secret,
let me be a mystery.....
than what you see.
behind a quiet face
lies a sea of insanity.
I am
like those feelings,
that find no expression.
like those few words,
that have no definition.
like...
The depth of the ocean
you never discovered.
Like those mountain tops,
Which were never conquered.
Like...
those fine and tiny
grains of sand,
which when held, find a way
and escape through your hand.
What you think of me
might be just your imagination.
For that might be a mirage
perhaps just an illusion
Dont go by my looks
For looks can deceive.
The truth is not always
what your eyes perceive
Yet I am, like the rest
just a face in the crowd.
A tiny dot on the earth,
A perfection that is flawed.
Do not try to find me,
Do not understand me.
Let me be a secret,
let me be a mystery.....
18 rhymes:
bloody brilliant!!!!!!!!
thanks a ton trinaa!!:)
Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job dear!
Welcome to my blog…….
This is amazing!
Wow.
wow... b'ful lines.. b'ful
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Every tiny dot on the Earth is a mystery for sure. True, so true.
Keep Rocking!
@hfm,rohit
thanks guys!:)
@tanvi
indeed it is tanvi!:):)
thanks fr your comments ppl
That was very well crafted! :)
hey, came across ur blog on orkut..and i must say, i am glad i came across such a brilliant blend of creativity and originality...
hey, if time permits, view my blog too....http://ninadbhangle.blogspot.com
waiting for ur suggestions...and one more thing, i have added ur blog to my blogs i follow list..so keep writing and keep entertaining everyone....cheers!!
hey u write well gud...wid lots of emotions..
do hav a short cease in ma blog...hope u comment in....
haritha .....
www.arenaoflife.blogspot.com
Great poems ! I´ll come back to read moore!
A creative and happy New Year to You!
Liisa@ ottiliasveranda
@sameera, ninad,harita,ottilias veranda
THANKS A LOT GUYS!:D
CHEERS!
really well written!
the words melted me... vry nice poetry !!!
thanks everyone!:)
:)
almost a song! :D
Scribblers Inc.
thnks!:D
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